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Window to the world.

 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-08
Time: 15:59:19
WINDOW TO THE WORLD

The world outside my window
I often have a look
I'm supposed to say something poetic
like "the gently babbling brook"
I can see empty crisp packets
floating down so merrily
The tadpoles are in lager cans
I suppose it'll all float out to sea
There has been a car crash
wrapped around the majestic oak
Lets hope it didn't flatten
all the elf and fairy folk
Ok I'll close the blinds now
and drift away to sleep
Float on the gossamer of dreamland
whose secrets I shall keep

I can put this on here coz it's out in print
now - I wasn't allowed to before!
I entered a competition & made the final -
but this only took me 3 minutes to scrawl out
1 night.....
So if I can get published with this bit of
tosh maybe you lot can too - don't be
embarrassed to send your "works" in to
publishers
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Re: Window to the world.
 
sparkle_dust1990
Status: Moderator
Date: 2008-11-08
Time: 17:11:30
Wow, well done, that's brill!
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Re: Window to the world.
 
bedspoet
Date: 2008-11-12
Time: 16:12:52
great write that shows the impact mankind has
on the natural beauty of this earth, in
dreams we can see it as meant to be, a
pleasure to read and take care, Chris
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