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The big "C"

 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 15:01:15

THE BIG "C"

It was so good to 'see' you again
After oh so many years
And I didn't mean to upset you
When I cried so many tears
We talked about the past
And of the future too
I would give you all my future
And willingly swap with you
If only I could do this -
If I possibly could
I'd be the one to lie down
And be encased in all 'that' wood
You met David Bowie and sat upon his knee
I remember you telling me that
As your eyes they danced with glee
All those happy memories
Your own plus all we shared
Your whole life is flashing in front of us -
Your friends and others who care
And so my dearest friend
Your life lives on in me
You rest easy my friend, rest easy
In a calm and tranquil sleep

(In loving memory of Madeline)
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Re: The big
 
peachy1962
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 15:04:58
Awe very loving words indeed!

Sorry for your loss Whisky and yes our loved
ones live on inside our hearts and memeories!
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Re: The big
 
sini
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 15:08:48
that put a tear tae me eye

madelaine
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 15:14:28
I entered it in a competition in the hopes
that it would be printed in a book for her
family to have, that one didn't make it to
the final but another one of mine did - so
thats just been printed instead BUT never
mind - I'll print it out & have it laminated
for her family.
Hi Peachy n everybody x
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Re: The big
 
just_chi
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 16:07:45
HIYA WHISKEY!!!!!!!!
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 18:10:38
Hiya Chi, Inks., soz I'm slow in replyin on
this but I was otherwise engaged
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 19:01:02
As long as you bring a bottle of Full Malt
your in!
(What if there's no wedding & I'm just
blaggin you? Arghh fook it - come anyway &
we'll party till the gates of dawn)
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Re: The big
 
cathyb_
Status: Moderator
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 19:05:36

That one should have got in its really good

Can you post the one that was printed
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 19:22:42
Did post this last week I think - wasn't
allowed to before till it came out in the
book, it's a load of 'tosh' it only took
bowt 3 mins to write

WINDOW TO THE WORLD

The world outside my window
I often have a look
I'm supposed to say something poetic
Like 'the gently babbling brook'
I can see empty crisp packets
Floating down so merrily
The tadpoles are in lager cans
I suppose it'll all float out to sea
There has been a car crash
Wrapped around the majestic oak
Lets hope it didn't flatten
All the elf and fairy folk
Okay I'll close the blinds now
And drift away to sleep
Float on the gossamer of dreamland
Whose secrets I shall keep

Ok - you have to pay me now coz I got the
printing rights haha lol
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Re: The big
 
cathyb_
Status: Moderator
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 20:40:05


Thats really good

Wish I could get something in print
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 20:57:37
Thanx Cathy - but I only did it for the 1st
time this year for my mate who died, before I
just used to write bits of stuff, funny or
otherwise in family/friends birthday cards +
stuff for familys graves on their
birthdays/chrimbo etc. I'm not a poet - I
just know how to rhyme & string a couple of
sentences together!
I have a fear of artists n poets coz usually
their heads are stuck too far up their own
an.us
Gotta sign off now - hopefully be back on
later, nite y'all, Whisky xx
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Re: The big
 
cathyb_
Status: Moderator
Date: 2008-11-14
Time: 21:17:16


Night Whisky

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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-11-15
Time: 15:46:08
Marco - I'm only checking my messages now coz
friends have just arrived to visit & they
live MILES away so don't see them that much.,
am defo gonna get back to you babe - pmessage
you etc, speak to you soon.
Whisky xx
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Re: The big
 
bikermanvn
Date: 2008-11-15
Time: 18:39:31
some people write of momorie's past,
some people write of heart felt pain,
some people write to easy their pain,
some people encompass all their love,
some people write from the heart.
some people's heart's, break mine.
some people,s love of other's is
devine.
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Re: The big
 
whiskyagogo
Date: 2008-12-01
Time: 23:44:54
Some people write of memories past
And of the future too
Whatever we write anytime
Let our hearts be true
We have to write it on the page
It bleeds right from our heart
But as we write these simple words
The blood does never part
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